Copperhead_preview_pg6

very good work kenneth. Though I hate to say this...but I'm just trying to help, I'm sure you spent lots of time and effort to work on these, but I think it'll be better with more interesting lightings. I suppose the comic would be B&W. Like in an office, lightings from the window can form these "lines" that are very interesting. I dunno if u understand what I'm saying. Another thing, I think I see too many face shots on every frames (if that's the correct term in comics wakakak...) Sometimes I think, just a part of a body or a door or a computer screen or something is enough to convey the message. It can be more challenging but it engages the reader's mind more. Or so I guess. Ur the comic expert, u decide. Juz a suggestion...

PS: I take back what I said on angles...ur angles are great.